Research Paper:
DUE: Full Draft: Thurs, April 16
- DUE: Revision Plan Before individual meetings (Wednesday April 22 @ 11:59pm)
DUE: Final Draft Wed, May 6 at 11am
The primary object of the History Senior Seminar is for you to write an independent, original, research paper fundamentally grounded in primary source materials (20 page + bibliography minimum w/ proper footnotes). The goal is for this assignment to serve as a culmination of your career at Denison as a student of history. You might conceive of it as your opportunity to write an article-length piece of original scholarship. For this particular class, the paper must focus on the History of the Atlantic World (which we will define more accurately together over the course of our discussions), 1400-1890, roughly. The work must be grounded in one or more primary sources and draw widely upon secondary sources (journal articles and books).
Warning: This is not the equivalent of a high school report, it is an opportunity for you to produce original historical research. The research paper is to be fundamentally grounded in primary documents. It should not be an encyclopedic summary of other historians’ arguments or a narrative of events taken from secondary sources, but the presentation of your own arguments based on your readings of available primary sources and the pertinent secondary literature. Over reliance on secondary sources will adversely affect your grade.
The paper will be graded primarily on the depth, breadth, and quality of your research, the originality of your arguments and their persuasiveness, and the quality of your writing.
The paper should be typed, double-spaced, and in Times New Roman 12-point font. It should have 1-inch margins on all sides and employ proper citations in footnotes and the bibliography. Footnotes and bibliographies should follow the Chicago Manual of Style, 18th ed. You may use short citations (last name, short title) after an initial full citation of the source has been given. The paper will be due on Thursday, Dec 22nd, at 11am, but feel free to turn the assignment in early. Please upload a completed copy of your paper to Notebowl.
Hint: If you don’t already, you might consider using Zotero (a free bibliography program available at zotero.org)
One of the most difficult and yet crucial steps in the process will be to chose a historical problem and conceptualize a plan of how to frame your paper. Because many of you are not familiar with the history of the Atlantic World you should probably begin by thinking broadly about the types of historical questions, sources, and approaches that have drawn your highest degree of interest during your history career rather than trying to come up with an argument at the start. You might think of it in terms of what questions/problems within particular national histories you have found most compelling, and, what types of historical approaches or methodologies (women’s, economic, gender, race/ethnicity, political, intellectual, etc.) have captured your attention in other courses. With those ideas in mind, we can begin to brainstorm about the possibilities of conducting research on such a historical or historiographical question within an Atlantic framework.
Fundamental to this process is the locations of manageable and pertinent primary sources. Once you have a general historical problem you would like to explore, the next and most important step is to identify primary sources. Your historical questions, and the subsequent answers to those questions (your hypotheses) should emanate out of your reading of the primary sources.
I have provided an initial list of potential published primary sources (and there are so many more that we might find), but you will need to quickly move from a consideration of potential projects/questions to whether or not your project is manageable both in terms of available primary and secondary materials as well as time constraints.
Once you have settled on a general historical problem (you will be required to submit a Initial Statement of Research Questions and Sources on Sept. 14th) you will need to do lots of reading and note taking and begin to think about what your big historical and/or historiographical questions will be. Hint: As you read, take copious notes (with reference to exactly what you are reading and where you find it).
At this point, you should still be thinking about questions (derived in large part from you reading of primary materials) rather than arguments. You will also need to discover if other historians have attempted to answer your questions. (Email me a Research Proposal and Description on Sept 25th; see description below for specific instructions).
Thereafter, there are a series of benchmark assignments that you will be required to complete in order to help you towards completing your research project. They will include two (2) Primary Source Analyses (1st Complete Draft Oct 17th, 1st Final Draft Oct 19th; 2nd Complete Draft Nov 9th, Final Draft Nov 14th), an Annotated Bibliography and Historiography Outline (Oct 24th), a Historiographical Essay (Complete Draft Oct 31st, Final Draft Nov 2nd), a rough draft of your paper for peer review (Nov 30th), and finally a Plan for Revision (Due Dec 5th before one-on-one meetings to discuss Rough Drafts). Specific instructions for each assignment are below.
In writing your final project, it might behoove you to keep the following in mind.
- Include a theoretical discussion on the concept of the Atlantic world (which can be drawn, in part, from the initial writing assignment)
- A critical discussion of what an “Atlantic” perspective can or cannot reveal about your general theme and historical questions
- How, if at all, your perspective on your theme and/or your questions has changed as a result of using an Atlantic World perspective.
Hints:
- Make sure that your opening sentence is well written and that everything in it is factually correct.
- Ensure that your citations in your footnotes are correct (failure to do so will result in a 1/3 grade penalty)
- When using long quotes, do not expect them to speak for themselves. You must explain what the quote means to you in the context of your larger argument
Some Grading Criteria
- A paper that is not fundamentally grounded in the examination of primary sources cannot earn higher than a D as a final grade
- A paper that does not present a historical argument cannot earn higher than a C as a final grade
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A paper that is not explicitly grounded in an Atlantic World perspective cannot earn higher than a B as a final grade
- You can find a rubric for the final here
Assignments Related to Final Project
Initial Thoughts on Historical Question/Problem
Please submit a 1-2 paragraph description of a general idea for your research project, and some thoughts as to what types of primary sources that you might be interested in employing. Then we will schedule individual meetings to discuss the possibilities of your general topic. (Due Mon, Feb 2 at 11:59pm)
Project Proposal (5%)
Please submit a detailed description of your evolving Project that describes your historical question(s), historiographical question(s), and any questions you might have about your project. Also include an initial bibliography of at least ten (10) secondary sources, and a description/discussion of the primary sources that you plan/hope to employ. You should not have arguments yet (tentative hypotheses at best), the arguments should come from the primary sources!
Note: This should represent a refined statement of your research plan and not simply a reiteration of what was included in your “First Thoughts”. It should represent the growth and increased focus of you topic. Project Proposal graded on a full credit (+), ¾ credit (√+), half credit (√-) or no credit (0) basis. Complete Draft Due: Tues, Feb 17 Final Draft Due: Tues, Feb 24
Primary Source Analysis x2 (5% each)
Open your paper with a two to three paragraph description of your project. That description should represent an evolution of what you wrote in your Proposal, and should provide a foundation for your explication of your primary source.
You are to identify and critically analyze one of the more significant primary documents for your research paper. If your source base relies on a vareity of smaller sources (say, newspaper articles), you should analyze multiple sources.
Approach this assignment as if you are the first person to have discovered your primary source(s); and you wish to express what it contains, and its meaning(s) and significance to a fellow historian (me). In addition, you should consider what the document doesn’t say: what can’t it tell us? What sort of questions do the sources raise that can only be answered with other sources, primary or secondary?
Most importantly, you need to situate the document within the general questions of your specific research. How does it help you articulate, and potentially answer, the questions most central to your study?
Your analysis should focus on why this document was written, the meaning of the document in the context of your research, the assumptions and arguments that form the basis of the document, and the potential implications of the source for your project and Atlantic World History.
The Source Analysis should be a maximum of 4 double-spaced typewritten pages and should follow the general format instructions for the final paper. Please include a copy or (or a hyperlink to) the document you are analyzing if possible.
The professor must approve the primary source(s) you plan to use in advance.
Primary Source Analysis #1
Due: Complete Draft for Peer Review: Tues, March 3;
Final Draft: Thurs, March 5 (via Canvas).
If reasonable, please deliver a copy of your primary source, or the section of the source, that you evaluate along with your paper.
Primary Source Analysis #2
Due: Complete Draft for Peer Review: Thurs, April 2;
Final Draft: Tues, April 7 (via Canvas).
If reasonable, please deliver a copy of your primary source, or the section of the source, that you evaluate along with your paper.
Annotated Bibliography and Outline of Historiography (5%)
Annotated Bibliography
You will need to include a minimum of ten (10) secondary sources, including three articles in scholarly journals, as well as an initial list of the primary sources you plan to employ. You should also annotate the important primary sources you plan to use (and can annotate them as a “collection” (say a collection of letters) if necessary). The key is not just having the appropriate number of sources but to identify those sources most relevant to your topic. Remember to pay particular attention to the date and place of publication in addition to any basic information that might be available about the author as you make your selections.
Your annotated bibliography should include each of the four components listed below:
- 1) A refined, revised statement of your research proposal that identifies the major questions, issues, and hypotheses of your research (first identified in your Proposal and refined in your Primary Source Analysis). This should be accomplishable in 200-300 words. Doing do will provide a basis for your discussion of how the sources you annotate will contribute to your larger study.
- 2) Historiographical Outline. History as a discipline is best described as an ongoing conversation in which scholars engage and react to the scholarship that has come before. Historiography is your articulation of those conversations and debates (see the instructions below for more clarity). The goal of this exercise is to identify and describe at least three (3) layers of debate that surround your particular topic.
- 3) Complete bibliographic citations of your primary sources.
- 4) Evaluative annotations for at least ten of your secondary sources. Each source (with full bibliographic citation) must be followed by a paragraph-long annotation that identifies the central thesis of the work in question relative to your work AND contain your evaluative comments indicating the nature of the source, any special problems it might pose, and how it will contribute to your work (you should refer back to your opening here). In other word, explain the value of the source to your work
Include separate sections for primary and secondary sources.
Note: While ten sources might seem a significant number, it represents a bare minimum. For the sake of comparison, two of my published articles include 32 and 48 cited secondary sources, which would not include the other materials I consulted but did not need to cite.
DUE Tues, March 10
Historiographical Essay (7.5%)
Write an approximately 750-word, double-spaced, 12 pt font, historiographical essay, with proper footnotes, on your research project.
DUE: Complete Draft: Tues, March 24 Final Draft: Thurs, March 26
Description:
As a historian, you are contributing to ongoing scholarly conversation relevant to your research. In your final paper, you will want to position your own arguments relative to those conversations.
You will identify and describe the various historiographical debates that your topic addresses. Again, your essay should open with a further revised two to three paragraph description of your research problem that will serve as the frame for your discussion of other historians work.
Historians generally disagree on how to interpret the issues that we study. Therefore, your analysis should reveal the approach and basic argument of these works (as they relate to your topic) and the points of conflict and/or agreement between them.
In other words, you will reconstruct appropriate aspects of the conversations that have gone on among scholars regarding your area of investigation over time. You should also position your research project amidst those debates, revealing where your topic and/or thesis fit into this conversation.
What are the key differences between a traditional “research” paper and a historiographical essay? The former, a research paper, focuses on actual events, processes, or questions. The later, the historiography, critically examines the scholarship on a given topic, historical period, or event. “Critically” means that you must not only identify but also critique the arguments about actual events, processes, or historical questions. In such a paper, you refer to events, periods, processes, only in relation to others’ interpretations of the past. In addition, the purpose of a historiographical essay is not to prove one or another approach as correct, but rather to identify and critique all, or at least the most significant, approaches.
You are likely to find that there are various levels of conversation that you will want to discuss. For example, we have already discussed the meanings of “Atlantic World History” from a historiographical perspective in class. You might then identify other sets of debates particular to your specific topic within that more general perspective. For clarity’s sake, you should identify multiple and potentially layered historiographical debates in this paper.
The historiography should be structured around arguments, debates, and/or approaches and not around individual authors. (If you historiography reads like an annotated bibliography in narrative form, you should consider restructuring it).
Hint and Warning:
The historiographical essay should be a good tool to assist you in writing your final paper. You should not, however, simply cut and paste significant sections of the historiography into your final paper. Doing so will adversely affect your grade.
In addition, you are required to append the historiographical essay to the final draft of your paper as an appendix. Final papers that do not have a historiographical essay attached will be treated as incomplete.
Primary Source Analysis #2 (5%)
See instructions above, follow same format as Primary Source Analysis 1.
The professor must approve the primary source(s) you plan to use in advance. Unless explicitly given permission to do otherwise, you should write on a different source than the one you analyzed in your first primary source analysis.
Full Draft - This must be a full, polished draft of your final paper.
On Thurs, April 16, class will meet to conduct peer-reviews of complete drafts. You will be asked to read a couple of pages out loud to the author (so they hear their own prose and writing style) and then to read and comment on the entirety of the draft during the class period. I will provide a general worksheet to assist you in this process during class.
Please bring two copies to class to share with your peer reviewers and upload a version of your paper to Canvas for grading.
Drafts graded on a full credit (+), ¾ credit (√+), half credit (√-) or no credit (0) basis.
To receive full credit you must have a full draft, with a well-identified historical question, an arguable and manageable hypothesis, which begins to grapple with the pertinent primary and secondary materials.
Presentations (7.5%)
Per departmental policy, you will be required to provide a 10-minute presentation (with additional 5 minutes for Q&A) on your topic on Thurs, April 30 (10am-12noon). You should be able to address your primary questions, the primary sources you’ve employed to answer those questions, and your principle conclusions.
Treat this as a formal presentation – dress appropriately, and be prepared to field questions from the instructor, your classmates, and other faculty from the history department regarding your project.
I will be strict with the time limit. A good estimate is less than 5 typewritten pages will fill your 10 minutes. However, you would be better served to avoid reading your talk, and coming prepared to simply talk about your project.
I would recommend that you avoid the temptation to summarize your project but rather consider organizing your presentation around the following themes:
- Research Questions, Thesis and Argument: What is the topic of your research? What is the primary research question that drives your project? Why is it of interest to you and of significance for others? What are the major historiographical arguments surrounding your research? What is your thesis? What are the main points of your supporting argument?
- Sources: What types of primary (not secondary) sources did you use? Where there particular challenges that you confronted in working with these sources? What sources do you wish you could find but could not?
- Reflections: What observations do you have on the experience of doing a project of this kind? What have you learned about the nature of history in the process? How have you grown as a historian? This section should be short.
The strength of your own presentation and your participation, in terms of asking questions and making suggestions to fellow students during these presentations, will be included in your discussion grade for the course.
- Hint #1: While PowerPoint may be used to facilitate your presentation, please do not rely on it. Rather than listing all your major points and/or including long quotes on PowerPoint, and then reading them aloud to the audience, use it sparingly for major questions or images, etc. - Hint #2 – Listen carefully to the questions that your peers and members of the department ask you. Those questions can often serve as important indicators of potential revisions on the paper you could make before submitting the final version.
Non-exhaustive list of published primary sources that might serve as starting points for senior research***
- Thomas Gage, Travels in the New World
- Mawṣilī, Ilyās, An Arab’s journey to colonial Spanish America: the travels of Elias al-Mûsili in the seventeenth century, trans. and edited by Caesar E. Farah
- Robin Law and Paul E. Lovejoy, eds., The Biography of Mahommah Gardo Baquaqua (2001)
- The Interesting Narrative of the Life of Olaudah Equiano, edited by Robert J. Allison (Boston, 1995)
- A.O Exquemelin, (aka John Exquemelin) The history of the buccaneers of America; containing detailed accounts of those bold and daring freebooters; chiefly along the Spanish Main, in the West Indies, and in the great South sea, succeeding the civil wars in England. Includes accounts by Exquemelin, Basil Ringrose, Ravenau de Lussan and Montauban
- Johnson, Charles (or Daniel Dafoe). A General History of the Robberies and Murders of the Most Notorious Pyrates (1727; reprint, 1972)
- Robert Louis Stevenson, Treasure Island
- Daniel Defoe, Captain Singleton
- Daniel J. Vitkus, ed. Piracy, slavery, and redemption: Barbary captivity narratives from early modern England
- Richard Ligon, A True and Exact History of the Island of Barbadoes
- Miguel Leon-Portilla, ed. and trans., The Broken Spears: The Aztec Account of the Conquest of Mexico (Boston: Beacon Press, 1962, 1990)
- Bernal Diaz, The Conquest of New Spain
- James Lockhart, ed. and trans., We People Here: Nahuatl Accounts of the Conquest of Mexico
- Hernán Cortés, Letters from Mexico, trans. and ed. by Anthony Pagden
- Álvar Núñez Cabeza de Vaca, The Narrative of Cabeza de Vaca, trans. and ed. by Rolena Adorno and Patrick Charles Pautz (Lincoln: Univ. of Nebraska Press, 2003)
- Catalina de Erauso, Lieutenant Nun: Memoir of a Basque Transvestite in the New World, Michele and Gabriel Stepto, eds., (Boston: Beacon Press, 1996)
- Amerigo Vespucci, Letters from a New World: Amerigo Vespucci’s Discovery of America, Luciano Formisano, ed, trans.
- Jean de Léry, History of a Voyage to the Land of Brazil, Janet Whatley, trans., (Berkeley: Univ. of California Press, 1992)
- The Jesuit Relations and Allied Documents. Ed. Reuben Gold Thwaites. 73 vols. (New York: Vanguard Press, 1954)
- Marie de l’Incarnation, Word from New France: The Selected Letters of Marie de l’Incarnation, ed. and trans. by Joyce Marshall (Toronto: Oxford University Press, 1967)
- Mary Rowlandson, The Sovereignty and Goodness of God
- John Smith, Captain John Smith: A Select Edition of His Writings, Karen Ordahl Kupperman, ed.
- Gottlieb Mittelberger, Journey to Pennsylvania. Edited and translated by Oscar Handlin and John Clive
- Richard Hakluyt, The Principall Navigations
- George Peckham
- Thomas Harriot
- Sir Walter Raleigh
- Gordon Sayre, American Captivity Narratives
- Pater C. Mancall, Travel narratives from the age of discovery: an anthology
- Bartolomé de Las Casas, Various writings
- Peter Martyr, The Decades of the Newe Worlde
- George Best, A True Discourse of the three Voyages…of Martin Frobisher
- Arthur Barlowe, The first voyage made to the coasts of America (description of Virginia)
- William Strachey, A True Reportory of the Wreck (ship wrecked in Bermuda in 1609, wrote one of few narratives describing Powhatan society)
- John Winthrop, “Reasons to be Considered for Justifying the Undertakers of the Intended Plantation in New England”
- John Cotton, God’s Promise to His Plantation (among other writings)
- Thomas Morton, New English Canaan
- Morgan Godwyn, The Negro and Indian’s Advocate, Suing for Their Admission into the Church (1680) & other writings
- Hans Staden, Hans Staden’s True History